What got my attention:
Intentionally unsettling in the continual, literal journey up the staircase symbolising both the struggles with sexuality but also, since the camera follows around and around on repeat, the frustration with feeling like you’re going around and around with finding yourself. The discovery of little treasures that trigger happy and painful memories was super clever, and we got a fully committed performance from our lead.
Take it or leave it:
As we pretty much saw the same stairwell (given the position of the cars outside didn’t change are we to surmise that this was intentional (the going round-and-round bit) or just efficient film-making and not wanting to traverse the stairs over and over? Probably all three - and smart! However, you do look out for the cuts (hope they are there ha-ha as it is well edited) which did pull me out of it a bit. Likewise, the close-ups on the eyes are wildly out of focus, but again, you can claim it was an intentional choice and get away with it – the lack of clarity of our sole character. It’s sure a risk to do things on repeat, but you are drawn in and intrigued at what our lead will find next to haunt or inspire him.
Final hot air:
A really heartfelt, absorbing short that is no doubt very personal. You could argue that a lot of the situations are cliché, but I imagine that is the experience and the frustration with it. And who am I to argue with that? Great job!