The Clock-work killer

A great short film

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The view over the valley and the back alley were both really well chosen locations.

The cardboard on the wall was obviously not a real pin board but I respect the team for finding *a solution* rather than just scrapping the idea.

I thought the handling of the rumour was very clunky. A cop knowing the killer's next target surely immediately makes them a suspect or at least an accomplice of the crime??
I would suggest a meeting with some sort of shady underworld informant.
Or have the detective figure out the killer's pattern on their own and include the rumour somewhere else in the film.

I was VERY impressed by the use of gunshots as lighting in the finale. An inspired choice!

I can't wait to see what this team does next.

Honestly soo good! The story narrative was super easy to follow and perfectly told through some ripper cinematography, tunes and performance. Rad stuff!

A great story structure for the genre, and a great script. The performances felt nice and genuine. I liked the picturesque opening shot. Some fun touches were the fingerprint and the licking of the blood off the knife.

If you had more time to finetune this film, something to focus on would be the sound levels. You had some great sound effects (e.g. the rain) but they were a bit too loud while the voices may have been a bit too quiet. Overall though, this film was well-executed. Well done!