Who is Mr Pickles?!

This film unfortunately didn't hit as hard for me as your first one. Although it did have my favourite moment in the whole comp so far, that being the monsters “get ready with me”. Video. SO FUNNY! I feel like the second video would have been better if you maintained the found footage through into it. There is no rule to say your film can’t be more than one genre, in the same way your first film was both found footage and horror comedy, your second film could have been escape and found footage. I also think found footage would have been really cool for the people getting picked off one by one.
Other than that a lot of my notes from the first film stand, you have room to improve in all areas, as is to be expected in school teams, but your ideas and comedy are great. Keep improving and come back next year stronger and more expirenced.