Larry in the Corner

Huge wow! This was such a great concept and the actors went hard at embracing all those bits. The dead tired frustration with everything going on, and delving into all those various paralysis demon characters.

I think your story big idea to tackle in a 5 minute allotment. A great watch, but I if you wanted to develop it into a 20 minute short film, it could be an even greater watch. It'd give you more time to explore all the trauma/stories that lead to those various demons, just more development time in general, so the audience could appreciate and linger a little longer in all the build up before the conclusion.

But for that much story and that many characters in such a short time frame, and filmed in one weekend, you did brilliant. I hope you all keep acting and making things because you're a joy a joy to watch

What a great story idea! I particularly like the illegible contract and Larry's disinterested demeanour while the central character gets increasingly frantic. If you weren't scared of clowns before this, yeesh, your one really had me on edge!