Beaten to the Punch

PROS: Nice character work made you connect with the lead. Loved the addition of the dog too. CONS: Ending needed more of a 'punch' (no pun intended) just felt like it ended very suddenly - I did like the idea behind the end though :)

Your lead actor generated the perfect amount of likeability and pitty. I wasn't totally buying the 'cat and mouse' nature of film though. It could possibly have been made stronger by properly introducing the antagonist character, rather than jumping straight into having him annoy the lead.