The Forest Chorus

A sister and brother take a shortcut to school after they miss the bus. The brother finds himself in a scary forest scenario and meets various strange creatures. He then chooses to be turned into a white rabbit and gets suddenly run over. Great to see other mediums being used than live action. Nice use of warp effects. Good effort

Nice use of animation. Love what happened to the sister...

I loved this animation. It was dark and twisted, just as it was intended to be i'm sure! There was also a hint of a bit of horror-parody/comedy, and the audience appreciated this. Nice animation, it suited the story well.

Admirable attempt to capture the atmosphere

I think you hit the mark you were aiming for here - it was a good twisted tale - and I have to say the hanging gave me the biggest laugh of the evening (not sure if that says more about you or me!) Be keen to see what you would do with this idea in more than 48 hours....

After missing the bus, a brother and sister take a short-cut through a haunted forest. When it gets dark, the boy loses his sister and must search the forest to find her. Animated in a simple cut out style this film really didn't have a lot happening in it apart from two shock moments that I won't spoil here. Some of the audio was a bit variable which didn't help in getting the story across. As such, I switched off a little. I guess you achieved your aim of making a dark, trippy little film so well done!

A cleverly written script, however found the animation difficult to follow.

I think you hit the mark you were aiming for here - it was a good twisted tale - and I have to say the hanging gave me the biggest laugh of the evening (not sure if that says more about you or me!) Be keen to see what you would do with this idea in more than 48 hours....