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The Immortal

I am heavily impressed by this film! The opening scene is incredible, the black and white look really lends itself well to the story, I'm still wondering how you did all the effects! The characterizations were good and the costumes worked well.

I feel its biggest downfall was in the sound department. A little bit of cleanup and levelling on the dialogue audio would make a huge difference to being fully invested in the story. The gunshots sounded like they could use a bit more bass.

I only half agree with others about the pacing in the boat, as its intentions were a mexican standoff, as i've said the audio fix would've helped that a lot. Also I feel like the two of them should have been close in the boat the whole time. In the OTS shots the two felt close which worked well for the tension, but then the wides showed them further apart which was a little jarring.

All in all a brilliant film! Can't wait to see what you do next. 3.5/5