The Kids Room!

This was stand out, you are all such fabulous actors. The deadpanned humour and building existential crisis in everyone was so funny. Every single person played their character spot on, and I enjoyed the panning camera or odd shots to see the behind the scenes. The main show host I think genuinely could front a kid’s show, and ‘Dave’ portrayed bare minimum going through the motions energy perfectly.

My one note is just the cartoons. They looked like images you pulled from across the internet, which meant some of them were AI generated (like if you look at the cheese on the burger). And while AI images themselves can’t be copyrighted, all the art that was fed into them is, so it’s still plagiarism.

The bit itself was great, though, teaching kids about where their meat comes from haha. The song too, awesome job. Possibly this could have another place to build on the tone of the rest of the show. You could have drawn the images yourselves, even as stick figures, and then hissed off camera at the art person for putting minimum energy in or not hiring an actual artist etc.

But I only mention because of how excellent every other aspect of your film is. I know you’re a school team, but aside from your ages, you wouldn’t be able to tell, it was that good. I hope I get to see loads more from you all in the future