Barbara and Harper's Tea Party

Didn't predict the twist at the end, so it was a great attempt at the 'shock ending' genre. Some good acting in places, but some further editing might help to mask some of the more forced moments. To really nail the unsettled/scary feel during the middle section, you might have benefited from more dramatic lighting, rather than the flat, room lighting. Overall, the story made sense, and held my attention. Good job!